BreezeStar's Form

Posts : 2 Join date : 2011-08-25

Name: BreezeMist

Age: 23

Gender: Female

Clan: WindClan

Appearance: A Orange and White Tabby, with Green eyes.

Family
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Mother: LeopardClaw
Father: StormClaw
Siblings: ShadowStar

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Personality: Funny, Kind, Loyal

History: Breeze was born from LeopardClaw and StormClaw. She joined WindClan at 10 moons. She then became Deputy at 20 Moons. She Became Deputy at 23 moons.

Admin Posts : 21 Join date : 2010-04-27

History is required.

Admin Posts : 21 Join date : 2010-04-27

This isn't you it's your character please use 3rd person.

Admin Posts : 21 Join date : 2010-04-27

...Your history makes no sense, how could you be leader if you were in a coma. Also 3rd person!!